Monday, November 7, 2011
the ice cream comets
Room13 make ice cream comets
Mrs King spoon some Chocoe ice cream in to my harnd and when my ice was mating i had to row a ball and i put some Sahking and when the ice cream was mating bewt in my harnd and i went get me a cove and i and i put my little ice cream in the cove . and when my i look in my was dred and i went to get a maerk to clen my hared and my hard was woi was derd and in my harnd deur was some sacking and when i eat my ice cream and when tesadlike my ice cream it was cloud and i was skating with my ice bause it was cloud and when I was Finsh of my ice cream comets and I went to the talp to the
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term 4 2011,
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Hello Flora! You have wonderful artistic skills. Your comet looks like a brown diamond, floating in the sky. I bet it tasted better than it felt in your hand! Well done.
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