Friday, March 22, 2013

Old man walking on the beach

This man walking along the beach
This man is walking along the beach.  As he walked step by step making footprints on the sand, he is feeling happy. He is holding his shoes, and he can smell the smell of the ocean. He is wearing an oversized grey coat and long brown pants. This man was walking and he saw the kids and their family playing with their friends on the sand. 

When the man was walking past the people he said "hi" to the people playing. When he stopped he made a sand castle. Then he went to pick up some shells to put on his sand castle. When he was finished he went off into the toilets and put on his swimming togs to have a swim.

(Edited with some help from the teacher)

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